专题六 叙事描写类 写作指导 叙事描写类的书面表达是以叙述和描写为主要表达方式，以写人、叙事和经历、写物、绘景等为主要 内容的文体： 这一类的书面表达动词使用率最高，且富于变化，用得最多的是动词的过去时态，其他各种时态为辅。 合理使用丰富多彩的动词时态是这类书面表达的首要语言特征。人物类书面表达如果是对人的性格、外貌 等叙述常用一般现在时，如果通过事件来刻画人物的性格，那么就要用过去时。写好这类书面表达要注意 以下几点： 1. 头绪分明，脉络清楚 写好书面表达，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析， 弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都要围绕五个＂W＂和一个 ＂H＂来展开，分别是 why, what, when, where, who 及 how。 2. 突出中心，详略得当 在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的一步。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章 主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写或粗述那些非关 键的次要情节。面面俱到反而会使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问 题，也需要一定的技巧。 3. 用活语言，准确生动 记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的叙事描写类书面表达的语言既 要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事物描写得具体生动。 常用表达 1. Among various kinds of things/persons in my mind ... is the most unforgettable one. 2. On a sunny/rainy morning, while I was...First of all... Then ... After that... In the end ... 3. He/she/this was one of the most meaningful/enjoyable/unforgettable persons/things that I have ever met/ experienced, I will remember him/her forever. 加分句子： 1. Sth impressed me greatly... 2. What impressed me most is that... 经典句型： 1. Last Sunday（Saturday...）, it was sunny（rainy, windy, foggy） 2. I got up very early （late）. After breakfast I went to with my friends by bike, bus... 3. We enjoyed ourselves. 4. We forgot the time. We didn’t come back until 5 o’clock. 5. We all felt very tired, but we were happy. 6. I thought I would never forget this trip. 7. Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our holidays. 8. We visited a lot of places of interest. 9. We had a good time there. 10. We bought a lot of things. The clothes here are good and cheap. 写作模板 ◦ 人物类书面表达主要通过刻画人物性格，塑造人物形象，反映生活，表现主题，模版如下： 开门见山，引出要 介绍的人物 正文（时间、地 点、人物……） I will never forget my English teacher…She is a beautiful woman… It was…o’clock, I did…in… I realize that… 感想 ◦ 叙事和经历类书面表达通过叙述事件的起因、经过和结果表现主题。 ◦ 写景状物类书面表达通过对事物和景点的描述表现主题。文章宜采用总—分—总的结构或总—分的结 构，模版如下： 介绍景观 介绍旅行 经历 总结旅行感受 … is one of the most beautiful scenery spots. I volunteered a guide to introduce… It was a busy and tired day but I was very happy. 真题再现 典例一（2021·湖南湘潭市·中考） 榜样，就是那些闪耀着奋进之光的人，他们为我们指引方向。在你的成长过程中，一定有很多值得你 学习的榜样，比如袁隆平、钟南山、老师、亲人、朋友……假如你是李华，学校英语社团将举办“The person I admire”的演讲比赛，请你根据要点提示或做适当发挥，写一篇介绍自己的榜样的演讲稿。 要点提示： What does he/she look like? What is he/she like? Why do you admire him/her? 参考词汇：钦佩 admire 鼓励 encourage 挑战 challenge 成功 succeed 树立好榜样 set a good example 实现我的梦想 achieve my dream 要求： 1.词数在 80 词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2.文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息。 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is_______________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【优秀范文】 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is my mother. She is in her forties. She is a great mother and a good doctor. When I have troubles in my study. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them and encourages me to challenge these problems. And I always succeed in solving them. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She sets a good example for my study. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor. I hope I can be a person like her. I’m sure I can achieve my dream one day. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself. That’s all. Thanks for listening. 【详解】 1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和问题，写出自己最敬佩的人是谁以及为什么值得你敬佩等，可以适 当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头和结尾融合起来，用第一人称和第三人称相结合来写作，时态以一 般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。 典例二（2021·湖南怀化市·中考） 假定你是李华，2022 年亚运会将在杭州举行，你想成为一名志愿者，请用英语给组委会写一封信，内 容包括： 1. 擅长英语，口语很棒； 2. 性格外向，乐于助人； 3. 爱好运动，了解亚运会等。 要求： 1. 文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名； 2. 包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥； 3. 词数：80 词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 参考词汇：be good at/I do well in 擅长 spoken English 口语 outgoing 外向的 Dear Sir/Madam, I am Li Hua, a middle school student. I’m glad to know that the Asian Games will be held in Hangzhou in 2022. I’m writing to a