第 4 讲：冲刺满分作文之 中考满分作文仿写练习 DAY1 1.【原句】Following Jane’s way of studying chimps, our group are all going to visit them in the forest. 跟着简研究黑 猩猩的路线，我们团队都去森林中探望他们。 [模仿要点] 句子结构 现在分词，+主句 【模仿 1】听取老师的意见，我在英语学习上取得了快速进步。 ______________________________________________________________ 答案：Following the teacher’s advice, I made rapid progress in English learning. 【模仿 2】按照指南，你一定会解决这问题。 ______________________________________________________________ 答案：Following the instruction, you will surely solve the problem. 2 【原句】Only after her mother came to help her for the first few months was she allowed to begin her project. 只有在 她的母亲来帮助她的头几个月，才让她开始她的计划。 [模仿要点] 句子结构：Only +状语（主句要倒装） 【模仿 1】只有当您不遗余力你能取得重大进展。 ______________________________________________________________ 答案：Only when you spare no effort can you make great progress. 【模仿 2】只有当我们认识到我们生活环境的重要性，我们才能意识到保护环境就是保护我们的家。 ______________________________________________________________ 答 案 ： Only when we came to realize the importance of our living environment can we be aware of the fact that preserving nature is preserving our home. DAY2 1.【原句】With your partner, list the countries that use English as an official language.和你的同学一起列出把英语作 为官方语言的国家。 【模仿 1】请用这些词，造一个句子来描述你心中的想法。 ______________________________________________________________ 答案：With these words, please make up a sentence that can describe what you feel in your mind. 【模仿 2】他用了各种色彩，画一幅画显示了他家乡的变化。 ______________________________________________________________ 答案：With different colors, he painted a picture that showed the change of his hometown. 2．【原句】English is also spoken in Singapore and Malaysia and countries in Africa such as south Africa. 在新加坡， 马来西亚和非洲其他国家，比如南非，人们也说英语。 [模仿要点] 列举三者以上事物的表达 【模仿 1】下课后我喜欢去踢足球，打篮球和参加一些有趣的活动如唱歌跳舞 ______________________________________________________________ 答案：After class I like to play football and basketball and take part in some interesting activities such as dancing and singing. 【模仿 2】在英国旅游期间，我们参考了博物馆，城堡和一些名胜如一些公园和花园。 ______________________________________________________________ 答 案 ： During the tour in the UK, we visited museums, castles and some places of interest such as some parks and gardens. DAY3 1. 【 原 句 】 I wonder if it’s because I haven’t been able to be outdoors for so long that I’ve grown so crazy about everything to do with nature. 我不知道这是不是因为我长久无法出门的缘故，我变得对一切与大自然有关的事情 都无比狂热。 [模仿要点] 句子结构： wonder ＋if 表语从句 ＋ so …that 从句 【模仿 1】我不知道是否因为我的卤莽使得史密夫先生对我这么生气。 ______________________________________________________________ 答案：I wondered if it was because I was so rude that Mr. Smith was so angry with me. 【模仿 2】他在想是否因为她的朋友对她很关心所以她的心情才平复下来。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 答案：He wonders whether it is because her friends are so concerned about her that she has calmed herself down. 2．【原句】 I can well remember that there was a time when a deep blue sky, the song of the birds, moonlight and flowers could never have kept me spellbound. (定语从句) 我记得非常清楚，以前，湛蓝的天空，鸟儿的歌唱，月光 和鲜花，从未令我心迷神往过。自从我来到这里，这一切都变了。 [模仿要点] 句子结构： It is/was a time when …There is /was a time when…This/That is/was a 【模仿 1】我还记得这对他来说是一个艰难的时期，他遭受到了身心的打击。 time when… _______________________________________________________________________________ 答案：I can well remember it was a hard time when he suffered a lot physically and mentally. 【模仿 2】在中国历史上,曾经有过一段时期中国鼓励与世界其他国家进行贸易。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 答案：In Chinese history, there was a time when China encouraged trade with the rest of the world. 3. 【原句】It was the first time in a year and a half that I’d seen the night face to face. 这是我一年半以来第一次目睹 夜晚。 [模仿要点] 句子结构： It is/was the first (second…) time that sb + 现在完成时/过去完成时：这是某人第几次做某 事 【模仿 1】这是我们第一次面对面地谈论到这件事情。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 答案：It is the first time that we have talked about this issue face to face. 【模仿 2】这是他第二次参与怎样解决这个问题的讨论。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 答案：It was the second time that he had joined in the discussion about how to do with the problem. DAY4 1.【原句】But the one million people of the city, who thought little of these events, were asleep as usual that night. 但 是，唐山市的一百万居民几乎都没有把这些情况当一回事，当天晚上照常睡着了。 [模仿要点] 句子结构：由 which 引导的非限制性定语从句 【模仿 1】李宇春现象超越了她的声音，即使最狂热歌迷们也承认她的声音是非常弱的。 _______________________________________________________________________________ 答案：The Li Yuchun phenomenon, however, goes far beyond her voice, which even the most a