Day 1 第二节 书面表达 某英文报社正在开展“环保”大讨论，向你约稿。请你以垃圾分类为主题，按照以下要 点发表你的观点。 1. 意义；2. 现状；3. 建议。 注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.文章标题已拟好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：垃圾分类 garbage classification Dear editor, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 【满分作文】 Dear editor, I am so glad to have the chance to join the debate. Now I want to say something about garbage classification. As we all know, some people would throw all waste like plastic, paper and glass into the same public dustbin, without thinking whether they are recyclable or not. But garbage classification is very important. On the one hand, without classifying, some waste will remain where they were placed for a long time. As a result, it will pollute the earth. On the other hand, waste is just the misplaced resources. We can recycle waste by classifying it and making full use of some leftovers. Thus, garbage classification is meaningful to us. We can do it just now. For example, we can collect plastic bottles and sell them to the waste shop and throw used batteries into the correct dustbin. Yours, LiHua 【分析】 本篇要求考生写一篇稿件来陈述垃圾分类的意义，现状，并且就现状给出自己的建议。 【详解】 第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时 结构：总分法 要求：1.表明主题 2. 1）现状（垃圾到处扔，垃圾分类做得不好） 2）垃圾分类的意义（减少污染，有效利用可循环利用垃圾） 3. 建议（加强垃圾分类学习，提高全民垃圾分类意识） 第二步：列提纲（重点词组） be glad to do/ whether …or …/on the one hand，on the other hand/ make full use of 第三步：连词成句 1. I am so glad to have the chance to join the debate. Now I want to say something about garbage classification. 2. As we all know, some people would throw all waste like plastic, paper and glass regardless of whether they are recyclable or not. 3. Garbage classification is of great importance. 4. On the one hand, if we keep classifying garbage, our environment will become better. For the long run it can benefit generations. 5. On the other hand, some garbage such as left-overs , can be recycled. 6. We can do something to make the recycling garbage to its full use. 7. As far as I am concerned, government should let citizens know the importance of garbage classification, and promote their awareness of green concept. 第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词） 1. 表文章结构顺序：first of all; to start with; firstly；in the end,；at last… 2. 表并列补充关系：what’s more,；besides; in addition; as well as；last but not the least… 3. 表因果关系：because; as; so… 第五步：修改润色 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连 贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了复合句，例如：As we all know, some people would throw all waste like plastic, paper and glass into the same public dustbin, without thinking whether they are recyclable or not.句中 as 引导非限制性定语从句，whether 引导宾语从句；On the one hand, without classifying, some waste will remain where they were placed for a long time. 句中 where 引导地点状语从句。