2021 届高三英语模拟试题分类选编·名校专辑（浙江卷）07 2020 年 9~10 月·读后续写 1.（2020·浙江省东阳中学月考）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 It was the hottest time of the year in southern California. Steve, a star basketball player at the University of California, with his cousin Zach, had planned a camping trip in the Great National Forest for their summer vacation. The boys packed clothes and supplies into a bag, and began their great adventure with the dog Brady early in the morning. Upon arrival, Steve pulled over to the side of the road along the bank of the river. “A wonderful place for fishing,” Steve exclaimed in delight. Zach nodded in agreement. At high noon, the sun was scorching hot. With a good harvest of fish, the boys marched into the forest with Brady following them. After a long walk, they found a clearing that was ideal for a campsite (野营地). The camp was set up immediately as Steve knew all the tricks of an experienced wilderness camper. An afternoon nap was absolutely a special treat in mid-summer. However, the boys were waken up by the fierce barks of Brady. Outside, heavy smoke filled the air and wind-blown flame was skipping from the top of one tree to another. The long dry summer turned the forest into a tinderbox. In a little while, Steve and Zach were inside their tent packing their belongings. “Let’s go! We can make it back to the river!” They headed down against the fire-wind in the direction of the river. But Brady barked a sharp warning. Ahead of them lay a thick curtain of smoke across the track. They would never make it through that. Steve was uneasy for it was hard to find a safe way to escape in the heavy smoke. Brady lifted his head and sniffed the smoke-laden wind. Next moment, the dog bounded away and disappeared down a sharp slope. The boys shouted for him, but he didn’t come back. Steve couldn’t blame Brady for panicking. He himself wanted to run even though he didn’t have a clue which way. 注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2. 至少使用 5 个以上的短文中标有下划线的关键词语 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: Steve and Zach hadn’t gone far when there was a familiar bark. ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Brady pulled again, in spite of the boy’s disbelief, urgently. ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________ 【答案】 Steve and Zach hadn’t gone far when there was a familiar bark. Brady came bounding, stopped directly in front of Steve and hit him with his head, pushing him back toward the slope. But Steve didn’t get it. Then Brady grabbed the boy’s jeans and started pulling. The message was clear, but Steve hesitated. Of course he remembered Brady saving his uncle’s life when the dog was much younger. Was he still sharp enough to get them through this? Brady pulled again, in spite of the boy’s disbelief, urgently. “OK, big guy,” seeing the fire was touching underbrush nearby, Steve made up his mind. Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees. Several times the big dog stopped. Often he changed directions to find the right way. The boys were so tired but the dog urged both boys to go on. Steve was almost numb when he heard it—the wonderful sound of rushing water! They made it back to the river. 【解析】 【分析】 这是一篇读后续写作文。 【详解】 通过阅读所给文章可知，文章主要记叙了在南加州一年中最热的时候， Steve 和 Zach 带着小狗 Brady 一起去国家森林露营，结果遇到了森林大火，被困在了森林中。而这时小狗 Brady 却跑开了， 孩子们大声喊他，但他没有回来。 续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：Steve 和 Zach 还没走多远，就听到了熟悉的狗叫声。后文应当 描写 Brady 回来后的情况，Brady 拉扯 Steve 的裤腿想要带他离开，Steve 却犹豫了，他怀疑 Brady 是否足够聪明能让他们渡过难关。第二段开头是： Brady 不顾男孩的怀疑，再次焦急地拉扯起裤腿 来。后文应当描写 Steve 下定决心跟着 Brady 走，Brady 领着他们走下斜坡，进入树林，终于最后在 Brady 的带领下，男孩子们最终回到了河边。 续写内容应当符合逻辑，本篇主要以一般过去式为主。用 5 个关键词加大了写作难度，考生应熟悉 关键词，以便在适当时候加以运用。写作完成后，要将关键词下划线。词数为 150 左右。 【点睛】 本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如： in front of, in spite of, hesitate；make up one’s mind；directions；urge sb. to do sth.等高级词汇；时间状语从句 Of course he remembered Brady saving his uncle's life when the dog was much younger.；非谓语动词的运用“OK, big guy, "seeing the fire was touching underbrush nearby, Steve made up his mind.等高级句式。 2.（2020·浙江月考）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 September is most beautiful in Strathroy, where people wholeheartedly enjoy the simple pleasures of life and nature. Roland was no exception. He w