牛津深圳版八年级下学期期末复习 查缺补漏冲刺满分 (期末必考话题作文) 专题 06 单元话题满分范文 20 篇 1.注意篇章结构，合理布局 开始部分说出文中的要点、核心问题。 正文部分围绕主题展开叙述、讨论。 结尾部分对全文内容进行总结和概括。 2.确定主题句 主题句是全文对概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常 主旨句最好放在作文的开头，而后是对全文主题句所提出的内容进行解释、论述。 3.重要连接词 表示顺序增加 First, then / next, after that / next, finally For one thing … for another…, On (the) one hand…on the other hand, Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also 表示时间顺序 now, at present, recently, at first, in the beginning, to begin with, later, next, finally, form now on, from then on, till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during, 表示解释说明 now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover 表示转折关系 but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the hand 表示并列关系 or, and, also, too, not only … but also, both… and, either …or, neither…nor 表示因果关系 because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore 1．以 My experiences 为题，介绍一次你旅游的经历，主要内容包括以下几点： 1. 你曾经去过什么地方？ 2. 在那里你做过什么事情？ 3. 给你留下深刻印象的地方是哪里？ 4. 你还没去过而又很想去什么地方？打算什么时候去？ （所有的答案都写在后面答题卡上，作文写在后面的横线上） 作文 My experiences _________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】when I was five years old . my Father took me to Canada 。It was my favorite vacation Canada has many beautiful and large cities，such as Toronto ，Montreal and Vancouver .During my trip ，I visited many parks ，among which zhongshan park impressed me most ，for it was built in memory of sunzhongshan。I’ll never forget the beauty of Canda。 I have never been to a beach,so I hope I can go to the beach next vacation. 【解析】 【详解】 试题分析：这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。本文要写的材料比较具体，主要描述去过 哪里，做了什么，印象深刻的是什么地方，将来打算去哪里。我们要做的就是运用正 确的英语把这些内容表达出来。我们要好好选用词汇和短语，可以适当发挥。根据材 料内容可知主要用一般现在时态，描述将来的打算用将来时态。 【亮点说明】这篇短文时态正确，在描述自己去过的地方用到了过去时态，将来的打 算用将来时态。同时使用了固定句式和短语，为文章增色.如: During my trip, have never been to, among which ,such as.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以 适当引用, 让文章更出彩。 考点：提纲作文。 2．现在越来越多的人喜欢养宠物，然而每个人对于养宠物的看法不一。假设你是 Esther，最近你们班展开了一次以“Should people keep pets?” 为主题的班会，请根据下 列 提示，写一篇 80 词左右的短文发表你自己的看法。开头及结尾已给出，不计入总 词数。 提示： 1. 宠物非常可爱，它们可以带给孩子们快乐。 2. 宠物可以陪伴独居老人，使他们感到忙碌和充实。 3. 养宠物可以使人们变得更有责任心、学会如何去照顾他人。 4. 你自己的看法。 Should people keep pets? Many people have different opinions on keeping pets. I think it’s good to keep them. In a word, keeping pets is helpful to us. 【答案】Many people have different opinions on keeping pets. I think it’s good to keep them. Recently, more and more people like to keep pets. Some of them even regard their pets as one of their family members. Because they can make their children happy. They also say that pets can help them do some useful things and bring them joy and happiness . I also like pets. Pets are our good friends. They can always be with single old men, make them feel busy but happy. Keeping pets can also make people become more and more responsible, and people can learn how to look after others. In a word, keeping pets is helpful to us. 【解析】 【详解】 1. 题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应该认真审题，确定文章的内容。 提示给出了 3 点关于养宠物的优点，并且还要加上自己的观点。文章可以使用一般现 在时即可。 2. 例文点评：本文内容充实，包含了所给的提示，并且按要求谈到了自己的观点。 3. 高分亮点： 短语：more and more； regard their pets as one of their family members； 句型：They also say that pets can help them do some useful things and bring them joy and happiness. 3．作为一名 21 世纪的中学生，你一定喜欢充满浓浓爱意的家庭、美丽的校园和 丰富多彩的校园生活，但是，在生活中你或许也曾有过这样或那样的烦恼。请根据下 面表格中的内容提示，发挥你的想象，以“My problem”为题，写一篇不少于 80 词的英 语短文，要求内容连贯、符合逻辑。 你的问题 1.没有要好的朋友； 2.有孤独感，不愿和父母交流。 1.多参加活动； 老师的建议 2.多与同学交流； 3.把父母当朋友，多沟通，有问题共同解决。 ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________ 【答案】 原文： My problem As a middle school student, I love my loving family and the beautiful campus as well as the colorful school life. However, I also have some problems. I don’t have any good f