Module 7 My Past Life. 单元话题满分范文必背 1．书面表达 假如你是李华,上周日你独自在家照看你五岁的妹妹 Nana,请根据表格内容,写一篇短文。 上午 中午 活动 下午 感受 讲故事，唱歌，…… 煮面（cook noodles），休息（have a rest）， …… 玩游戏，看动画片（watch cartoons）…… …… 要求:1.参考表格内容,可适当发挥;2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整; 3.文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等); 4.词数:不少于 70 词。(开头已给出但不计入总词数。) Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home. In the morning, I told her many funny stories first. Then we sang and danced happily together. I also taught her to speak a few simple English words and she learned well. At noon, I cooked noodles with tomatoes and eggs. She said they were delicious. I was very glad that she enjoyed the lunch. Then we had a rest. In the afternoon, we played games together. After that, we watched cartoons until my parents came back. I felt tired but happy. 【解析】 【详解】 写作分析：这篇作文是要求写一份日常活动的描述。描述一天的行为活动。首先要注 意的就是时态，写作背景基于上周日，所以全文要使用一般过去时，其次要注意各个 短语的正确表达方式，最后不能忘记适当表达自己的感受。 写作亮点：善于分段，可以用首段进行概括性描述，阐明背景（my parents were not at home）。第二段可以进一步开始细节描述。涉及到的短语有 told her many funny stories，sang and danced happily，taught her to speak a few simple English words，cooked noodles，had a rest 等等，使用短语的时候也有亮点，能够通过副词 happily 或者介词短 语 with tomatoes and eggs 让动词短语的含义更加丰富。文章最后收尾简洁，用一句话 点出了自己的感受，使得文章结构完整。 2．假如你的英语老师叫陈华，请根据所提供的信息，以 My Teacher’s Past Life 为题， 写一篇英语短文，介绍她过去的生活情况。 Name Chen Hua a small village in Born in Guangdong Born on 18th June, 1978 Primary School Tiantou Primary School First English Mr Zhang teacher Character friendly, well-behaved 要求： 1. 词数：不少于 60 词。 2. 不要逐字翻译。 My Teacher’s Past Life ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Teacher’s Past Life Chen Hua is my English teacher. She was born in a small village in Guangdong on 18th June, 1978. The name of her primary school is Tiantou Primary School. Mr. Zhang was her first English teacher. At that time, she was friendly and well-behaved. She was helpful and was willing to help everyone. I think all of her teachers and classmates liked her very much. 【解析】 【详解】 题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。要求根据题目“My Teacher’s Past Life”和提示的内容完 成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡， 要注意涵盖所给提示。 例文点评：例文采用一段式；时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时；将题目要求的 要点都很好地融入到文章当中。 高分亮点： 短语：be born in；At that time；all of…等。 句型：The name of her primary school is Tiantou Primary School. 使用了 of 表所属。 I think all of her teachers and classmates liked her very much. 使用了省略引导词的宾语 从句。 【点睛】 首先认真审题，看清文章的要求和要点；其次，理顺自己的行文思路；再次紧扣要点， 注意句子之间的连接与过渡；最后要仔细检查是否有单词拼写错误和标点的误用等， 还要注意是否出现语法错误，有无重复遗漏，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。 3．根据下面表格中的信息提示，写一篇 60 词左右的英语短文。要注意短文的层次性 和语言的准确性，以及正确使用标点符号。 姓名 Li Shuai 出生地 Hangzhou 出生日期 26th August,1991 学校 Dongfang Primary School 启蒙老师 Miss Yang 第一位朋友 Wang Hai 性格 Nice;good 【答案】Li Shuai was born in Hangzhou．It is a beautiful city in Zhejiang Province．He was born on 26th August，1991．His school was Dongfang Primary School and Miss Yang was his first teacher．She was a nice teacher．His first friend was Wang Hal．Li Shuai was a nice and good boy．All his teachers liked him． 【解析】 【详解】 这篇作文要求我们根据题目中表格的信息，介绍李帅的个人情况，内容包括出生地、 出生日期、学校、启蒙老师、第一位朋友和他的性格。通过分析可知，这些内容都是 过去的事情，所以这篇短文应主要使用一般过去时态，每句话的谓语动词形式要注意， 变成过去式形式，尤其是要注意不规则动词过去式的形式。写作时应将表格中的所有 信息变成完整的句子，用正确的语法结构表达出来，不用遗漏要点，注意汉语表达和 英语习惯的不同。句子之间可以使用一些连词，使整篇文章意思连贯。 点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者根据表格中的内容介绍了李帅的情况，内容 完整，包含了题目所给的所有信息。短文里使用了正确的时态，出来第二句话，关于 李帅个人情况的内容都使用了一般过去时态，动词变成了过去式。短文里句子结构完 整，符合英语的表达规范，语法准确。文中较好的句式有 He was born on 26th August，1991、His school was Dongfang Primary School and Miss Yang was his first teacher．、She was a nice teacher、Li Shuai was a nice and good boy．All his teachers liked him 等。 4．请你根据下面的提示，写一篇介绍你朋友的短文，80 词左右。 1.我有一个亲密的（close）朋友叫李峰。 2.他出生在浙江省一个美丽又干净的小村子里。 3.村子里有一个池塘，里面有很多鱼。 4.池塘的旁边是他的母校——第二小学。 5.他的第一个老师是潘老师，39 岁，友好但是有时候对学生要求严格。 6.当时的好朋友是张慧明和夏朝，他们很调皮（naughty）。 要求:必须包括以上全部要点，语句通顺，字迹工整。 【答案】例文 I have a close friend. His